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Apr 27, 2012
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You scratch....
You scratch my back
and
I will yours
you continue to read me as
I always do yours
and
then why compose poetry
may I ask of you?
as not any,
if at all not many
read ……
why should I post one
for none to breed?
as I might as well write ........and compose
music it to my ears
ere I myself to the garbage bin
my bed
do dispassionately ...............dispose.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
judyanne
13 years 12 months ago
scratch, scratch
there you go loved
lol - 'ere I myself to the garbage bin'
- no i don't think so
bed is better
love judy
xxx
emogothgirl
13 years 12 months ago
HA hello world, this is loved...
you hear that neo? BURN.
loved it
mag
loved
13 years 12 months ago
Beautiful world,brief
precise
you cut each one to size
that's no surprise
emoth ...
you walk away with the first prize...
emogothgirl
13 years 12 months ago
well
not so sure what you mean, SO
while i admit i don't comment much anymore, i will counter with the fact that i don't find anything of much interest. and no excuses, i should be reading more. but i get next to no comments myself. although we don't write for commentary, do we?
loved
13 years 12 months ago
A comment is like kerosine or petro
which ...adds up like a flame
and
then the true poet comes out ...
with a new game
and
rests upon his shoulders
a new love... that emerges...
like the poetry above..