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Jul 23, 2022
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Yesterday Is Gone
Since we've been together,
It's been so long.
I don't know why
I keep holding on.
As the night it
Turns into the day,
No one could ever
Take our love away.
Since I gave to you,
The lonely heart of mine,
Yesterday is gone.
I have left it behind.
No matter how hard I tried,
Our love is so real,
There is no place to hide,
The way that I feel
All I want is,
To find my way through,
The lonely road that leads,
Me back to you.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rosewood Apothecary
3 years 3 months ago
Welcome
So…pretty complete work here. Bio says you’re a lyricist. I believe that from the structure here. I’m a lyricist myself. I couldn’t offer much criticism on this. It’s pretty good all around. Send me some links to your songs if that’s ok? I’d like to hear them if you feel like sharing.
Thanks for posting. Nice job and welcome to the site
I look forward to reading more.
Tim
Candlewitch
3 years 3 months ago
hello, Alex and welcome...
has this lyric been made into a song yet? I'd love to hear this set to music.
always, Cat