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wounded

In for repairs :)

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page, W.H.Auden, to many and various to include them all ...

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Ian.T

Ian.T

11 years 11 months ago

My dear Jayne

Is it you that's in for repair or the Poem ???
Just thought I would ask.
Take care and know we are thinking of you,
Yours Ian, and Friends

Seren

Seren

11 years 11 months ago

Ian

Definitely the poem in for repair at the moment I am not doing too shabby :) the poem was not up to my standards I will work on it and consider reposting it

love always JC xxx