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Nov 22, 2025
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witch way now?
Run, Run, marjorie greene
wash all your money until it's all clean
convince the whole country you're not really mean
your reward is a'coming for being obscene
go back to the swamp where witches convene!
About This Poem
Last Few Words: A short study in (monorhyme?) Is it effective, or cliché? I was aiming for "touché" lol
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Geezer
4 months 4 weeks ago
The sentiment is noted...
I like your title, your language use is good with plain words.
The rhythm is smooth, and the rhyme is well done.
I am perplexed as to the reason for just two words in the whole thing being capitalized. I would change the second line to read: washing your money until it's all clean, to eliminate the repetition of [all]. ~ Geez.
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