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Jun 09, 2011
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The Wine
My mind said no
Because of the wine
My body said go
Influence by the wine
I couldn't say no
Now I'm in a bind
My head is spinning
I can't say no
So you're winning
You scored a home run
I was out
Now We're done
— Barbara Writes, Jun 09, 2011
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Barbara Writes
14 years 12 months ago
Ian
I checked out your link and the books title and picture cover is beautiful
Barbara Writes
15 years ago
Hahaha
Thanks for the comment LOl
Glad it worked well
scribbler
14 years 12 months ago
Hi Barb
Next time you're up this way, drop in for a cup of wine lol...........stan
Barbara Writes
14 years 12 months ago
Hahahahaha Stan lol
You made my sad night a little brighter