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Apr 29, 2017
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Why not Appreciate Creative God revised
Praise thy woman
at length
God will be happy
as he has created
so many more women
yours is the first exception
he took time to chisel
Wonderful
beautiful
lovely woman
a life of a handsome
man
ask god
how much time he took
to make a poet
romantic one
out of you
a daring love couple
are you
god smiles
in appreciation
of both of you
why don't you two
also so do....
— lovedly, Apr 29, 2017
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About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Critiques
Keith Logan
9 years ago
Interesting concept
God as inadequate worker churning out many models of femininity until he gets one right.
lovedly
9 years ago
hahaahahaa
as if God is
HUMAN
all Lords are