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Where Eternity and Infinity Meet LOVED BY JESS
Many serious thoughts
cross one’s mind
 when the need draws
 some say it's normal,
 just wait
others shed tears
 what will happen
 when I'm no more
who shall whack my back
 as I whine
 who will say a bloody good man divine
 who will laugh and shout aloud,
 gone is the self wallowing clown
 there aren't many dirty fish
 In the ocean of life,
 many suffer beyond variable strife
 yet survive
 some die
 here and there…
 but no one about them does care
 ere they die somewhere
 out where eternity meets infinity
 Loved will be calling out at you
 Lovedly
 so be it
 a rebirth from toxic times,
 when all called to say
 the guy doesn't rhyme,
 anyway thank goodness
 he has merged
 but someone will yell,
 friend  but not yet submerged 
 till then let the twain be fixed
 Eternity with Infinity
 between you and me
 as I embark on a voyage beyond
Time
 where there is no need
 to be sad
 if poetry does
 or doesn't rhyme
Composing epicurial poetry too
 is no crime
Loved /Lovedly
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
 
                
Comments
Ray Whitaker
4 years 4 months ago
Nice!
I take it that you have combined two pieces?perhaps Jess was a someone in your life?
I like the progression, and the contexrs.
lovedly
4 years 4 months ago
thanks
jess was one of the earliest poets of neo
scribbler
4 years 4 months ago
Yep
Since you don't rhyme you will be forgotten........NOT lol. But you know something? The longer one lives the greater the possibility one will reach another day
lovedly
4 years 4 months ago
Stan you have hit the nail right into my head
A guy told my mom
I won't cross 13
then another one said
I will return from heaven
and I did in 77
all kept guessing
but as you say
100 years live I may
only Covid's exemption is needed today
then I will live to breathe another day
come what may
FORGET ME NOT
Even when I die some day
not today
but could be another day
one day
you may say