Wandering eyes

Wistful wandering eyes
scattering across
the cool colorless
cloud filled skies.
Desperately
digging through
its shallow
shades of white
in search
for some subtle
sight of light .

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Virginia, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe homer Dante Alighieri Oscar Wilde , William Wordsworth

This user supports Neopoet so it can be free to all

Comments

|Edward nigma

2 years ago

My inspiration

My inspiration was these two songs by Joan Baez

https://youtu.be/B_K6z3HiRAs?si=aO4jPS-fpn7LCDBa

And

https://youtu.be/nADCKIT_Kbw?si=pNiB7j4VthIo9g9h

Geezer

2 years ago

Thank you...

for sharing that with us. She was a very interesting woman in a very interesting time. ~ Geezer.

Lavender

2 years ago

Wandering Eyes

Hello, Edward,
Simply beautiful.
L

|Edward nigma

2 years ago

Thank you

When I wrote it’s about finding the light or hope in the darkest hour .

Lavender

2 years ago

Hello, Edward,

well written!
L

violet

2 years ago

Digging

I love your use of words here. Visceral and well written. Thank you for sharing.