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waffler's ..lilll Frency .. romance

DANCE ROMANCE IN FRANCE
We dance...
.as if in romance....
we feel ...we are free in France....
we prance....
we dance exercise romance...

we feel lighter
than the weight we carry.....
as we cross the floor
and
love to lay once more...
lay, yes...
as else we will be left unknown....
not having left a progeny....

so come dance
along the globe with me...

let's dance and romance....
as if we were both in France...
a prance..
freely .dance
as if we are in
traumatic
ROMANCE,
LET'S DANCE.....

— lovedly, May 17, 2016

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Critiques

judyanne

judyanne

10 years ago

prattle loved

Write something with meaning .... you can do better than this
Give me something good that I can convert to a sonnet ... I need some inspiration :-)
Love judy
xxx

judyanne

judyanne

10 years ago

lol

'degradation improve' - love it
xxx