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Mar 11, 2020
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I lay in a cupboard
lonely and scared,
boarded up
with gash and tear.
Yet she opens the door,
with a smiling face
and cradles me kindly,
rocking me soft with grace.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: i wrote about a child, who keeps a ragged doll in a cupboard, but treats it kindly.
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
Geezer
5 years 7 months ago
I had to...
read your last few words to get the picture. ~ Geezer.
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c lynn brooks
5 years 7 months ago
deligtfully soft and gentle.
deligtfully soft and gentle. But I ask one question of you would you not give a child of your making a name. Then why do you not have a title for this work as it is your creation is it not
something as simple as the cupboard for example