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Leonard
Leonard
Nov 27, 2014 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

unnameable - senryu

finely nuanced Zen
moments, my sensitive gaze
unfurls mysteries

— Leonard, Nov 27, 2014

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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: IND

Favorite Poets: Apart from Walt Whitman, the poet, there are a range of painters who have made a great impact on my work and life. Painters such as Henri Matisse, Pablo Picasso, Mark Rothko, Vincent Van Gogh and a host of others.

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weirdelf

weirdelf

9 years 8 months ago

hmm

is not "finely nuanced Zen" an incongruity or even superfluity?
Nonetheless
yes.