UNLAUGHABLE

The grifters sowed chaos and din
while ripping you off from within
you unfortunate chumps
were all duped by the trumps
what unlaughable states you are in

About This Poem

Last Few Words: I love writing limericks and always looking for ways to improve. I prefer silly ones, but ones that sting are also enjoyable to me. Heads up, the silly season is not far off!

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft