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The Undo Button
Rewriting Memory
Trust…I wish I hadn’t broken trust so many times
But I was egotistical and foolish too
I mixed the boundaries between wrong and right
With a skewed view of integrity and virtue
But the thing about distorted perception
Is that in a self-centered mind reality bends
There is no real sense of true north or direction
A broken moral compass with a shattered lens
And when it exploded into a million pieces
The most delicate place affected was the soul
Followed by disappointment and utter heartbreak
Knowing so many things were within my control
Sometimes I wish I had an undo button
Put things in reverse so I would’ve been alert
But it’s the never-ending lesson in life
I can’t erase the past for those I loved but hurt
About This Poem
Last Few Words: NaPoWriMo2026 Day 23
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Direction: Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Critiques
Geezer
1 month 1 week ago
Yeah...
I think that this probably hits all of us in at least a glancing blow, [sometimes, a direct hit]. This is an everyman's poem. I feel the lack of even rudimentary punctuation, didn't really hurt it much. The short lines expressing the gist of each idea, made for a conscious stream of thought that flowed rather well. ~ Geez.