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The Undo Button

Rewriting Memory

Trust…I wish I hadn’t broken trust so many times
But I was egotistical and foolish too
I mixed the boundaries between wrong and right
With a skewed view of integrity and virtue

But the thing about distorted perception
Is that in a self-centered mind reality bends
There is no real sense of true north or direction
A broken moral compass with a shattered lens

And when it exploded into a million pieces
The most delicate place affected was the soul
Followed by disappointment and utter heartbreak
Knowing so many things were within my control

Sometimes I wish I had an undo button
Put things in reverse so I would’ve been alert
But it’s the never-ending lesson in life
I can’t erase the past for those I loved but hurt

— Wallyroo92, Apr 23, 2026

About This Poem

Last Few Words: NaPoWriMo2026 Day 23

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Direction: Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: California, US, USA

Favorite Poets: Maya Angelou, William Carlos Williams, Pablo Neruda, Robert Frost, Edgar Allan Poe, Walt Whitman, Charles Bukowski, Alfredo Espino, Roque Dalton and several more.

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Critiques

Geezer

Geezer

1 month 1 week ago

Yeah...

I think that this probably hits all of us in at least a glancing blow, [sometimes, a direct hit]. This is an everyman's poem. I feel the lack of even rudimentary punctuation, didn't really hurt it much. The short lines expressing the gist of each idea, made for a conscious stream of thought that flowed rather well. ~ Geez.