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Nov 30, 2012
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(Undecided)
Ringing of steel
Slams as it closed
Made with bars
for be juxtaposed
Turning of key
Snap of the lock
Prison is made
Of concrete and block
No crime committed
Yet price be paid
Sins from another
Onto me was laid
Six long years
I will patiently stitch
A master plan
go off without hitch
For I know
That we both know
Who really is the lier
When I get out of here
I'm bringing brimstone and fire
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Just a write I been thinking about. I am unsure of the tittle and it may need an extra verse. Let me know what you think.
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Seren
12 years 11 months ago
walls of stone - title suggestion
I really dont think it needs an extra verse but if you feel it needs it go for it !
I really liked the poem I look forward to reading more from you kudos
sincerely Jayne-Chloe