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May 12, 2011
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Two, Six syllable Lines
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opinion speaks loudly
wisdom bites off its tongue
— brittle light, May 12, 2011
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Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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judyanne
15 years ago
lol
what do you want al?
blood everywhere clogging up all our keyboards?
seriously
a clever write
love judy
brittle light
15 years ago
hello Judy
thanks...minimalism, or more correctly, very short pieces can be fun...if they work as conceived
glad to see you back on campus
brittle light
15 years ago
only in demented cartoons..
only in demented cartoons...and in one of my nonsensical poems!
scribbler
15 years ago
Mnfe
Ori A it i onge fff. Translation: Sorry, I bit my tongue off lmao..........stan