Treasure Hunt

Sometimes I think poetry is
the time you first learned to skip
a rock across a glassy lake.
It touched the water five, maybe six times
before sinking below the surface.

You looked forever for the perfect one
to toss. Even though forever is where
the stone came from and returned to.

I don’t know for certain
all the places poetry can be found,
but if it lets me come back to these things
I’ll willingly continue the beautiful search.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Defining the often undefinable - good luck with that - LOL!

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: San Francisco Bay Area - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Bukowski, Billy Collins, Ted Kooser, Haiku & Harvey Kurtzman (a visual poet, of sorts)

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Comments

Lavender

2 years 1 month ago

Treasure Hunt

This is beautiful, Michael. Your title is so inspiring and true!
L

Michael Anthony

2 years 1 month ago

Thank you for sharing your

Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this one L! The search continues...

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Geezer

2 years 1 month ago

Yes, I would liken a poem to a treasure to be excavated like a treasure.
I thought the poem well crafted and it felt smooth.
One little bit, the word should be [to] instead of too, on the end of the last line- third stanza.
~ Geezer.
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Michael Anthony

2 years 1 month ago

Good catch Geez, thank you!

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John Leslie O'Kelley

2 years 1 month ago

Tresure hunt

Wow ,what a smooth writing. I'm not much of a poet but you seem to be. This reminds me of the dreamcatcher. I really enjoyed it and seek my own treasures from the past.

Michael Anthony

2 years 1 month ago