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Sep 30, 2025
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TOFU YOU
Why Ghina not buying your beens?
It's a matter of yin'n'yang means!
Be happy inhead!
Eat tofu'n'bread.
It's the bed of ill-bred, so it seems!
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Any feedback is greatly appreciated.
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
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Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Lavender
6 months 3 weeks ago
TOFU YOU
Hello, Thomas,
I have a farmer friend who grows fields and fields of soybeans. Suffering now, since the tariffs with China.
Thank you for this.
L