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Dec 19, 2014
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THOUGHTS
IT WAS IN YOUR EYES
LAST NIGHT I THOUGHT ABOUT YOU
I CAN NOT DENY IT BUT YES
YOU MAKE ME HAPPY
A DAY GOES BY AND I ASK WHERE ARE YOU
A ROCK OF A SOFT SPOT IS WHAT YOU ARE
YOU ARE THE AWESOME WEATHER EVERYONE LOVES
WHAT DO YOU TO BE IN ME?
FRIENDSHIP HAS A BOND BUT NOT LIKE THIS
THE FEELING YOU GIVE ME IS PLEASURE
INSIDE YOU BREAK ME UP
IF ONLY I COULD SEE THE FUTURE
I WOULD OPEN IT AND PUT YOU IN IT
YOU ARE A PLACE BEYOND WONDERLAND
I CALL BY A NAME
YOU WANT IT TO BE GREAT
YOU WANT TO HELP ME
BUT MY HEATS IS NOT FOR HELP
MY THOUGHTS ARE ALL ON YOU
by:AMOGELANG
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
AMOGELANG MOKOBANE
10 years 10 months ago
ITS Sad
ITS Sad
Barbara Writes
10 years 10 months ago
Wonderful poem Amogelang
Poetry is best READ when Not written in all caps.
Though a beautiful poem It like shouting and screaming it from the mountaintop to the young lady at the bottom of the Grand Canyon looking up at you with a smile bc she heard you loud and clear.
Welcome to neopoet. I hope to read more of your romantic love poems.
AMOGELANG MOKOBANE
10 years 9 months ago
I'M HAPPY YOU LOVE THE POEM
I'M HAPPY YOU LOVE THE POEM
Esker
10 years 10 months ago
different mind tract
like it...
some concepts were different in initial read
but eventually thinking about this
it will find a meaning in my old noodle..
people are determined to see through
Love is not an easy game..
like playing a game of hard contact sport
of unicycle...that dont come easy..
bumps and lumps
other then the loud caps
removal i like this poem also!
thank you
AMOGELANG MOKOBANE
10 years 9 months ago
IM GLAD THANKS A LOT
IM GLAD THANKS A LOT