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Jun 20, 2011
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test
a test of the workshop button
— Eduardo Cruz, Jun 20, 2011
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About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Rough draft
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Eduardo Cruz
15 years 1 month ago
Test answer
work or not
scribbler
15 years 1 month ago
hi Eddie
Nice free verse , now try it in western classic lol............stan
Eduardo Cruz
15 years 1 month ago
bad penny
your everywhere
Hahaha!
loved
15 years 1 month ago
Work or Not....
I dare say not,
As no work shall make you
My dear Eddie, not Jack,
A dull boy, not lad
And
If you work like Stan does,
Then Loved can't at all shirk.
So hold all hands,
In ring –a -ring roses,
Work or not to work
All ills disposes,
So work and compose,
A poem each,
On Eddie or Rose,
May be Stan,
If it does you please
and
As Lou and Barbara Whites stand by
For any emergency,
Thanks to friends,
All of thee
For reading me...
Eduardo Cruz
15 years 1 month ago
No, No, No,
thank you!
Eduardo Cruz
15 years 1 month ago
second test
second test
Kailashana2
15 years 1 month ago
I won't be submitting here in
I won't be submitting here in free worse. ;-)
Don't know if the workshop button is working, our page looked different on the Shark pool.
~A
Kailashana2
15 years 1 month ago
let's see what highlighting N
let's see what highlighting N/A does
Kailashana2
15 years 1 month ago
nothing
nothing
Eduardo Cruz
15 years 1 month ago
Anna
I tried also and nothing time to contact tech support
Eduardo Cruz
15 years 1 month ago
test
new test
Eduardo Cruz
15 years 1 month ago
Test 3
final test before beginning workshop of the highlight button
Eduardo Cruz
15 years 1 month ago
eureka
It works!!
Eduardo Cruz
15 years 1 month ago
Ian
Wise arse! hahaha!
come join my workshop it will be fun to have a madman like you. well interesting to say the lease. LMAO!
Regards,
Eddie
Hooded Stranger
15 years 1 month ago
Eddie
Here's a workshop test comment
HS
Hooded Stranger
15 years 1 month ago
Eddie
Here's a non-workshop comment.
HS
Eduardo Cruz
15 years 1 month ago
boss
stop shadowing me! hahaha
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