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Dec 26, 2025
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Terminus
you fell softly
back into my life
like a promise to
predate all others
pressed on my lips
good intentions tile
the road we traveled
to get here but
speak not of the
terminus today
hell be tomorrow
no god can stop me
from being the
devil you need
tonight
— Indivisible_Origin, Dec 26, 2025
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Style/Type: Free verse
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
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Geezer
6 months 3 weeks ago
Sometimes...
we get a second chance. I like it! ~Geezer.
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Lavender
6 months 3 weeks ago
Terminus
Hello, IO,
I felt the urgency in those final lines. Can only wonder about the poem written in the morning - hell be tomorrow.
Very strong,
L
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