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May 15, 2026
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Teething, 5/15/26
It's Jaws Clamp Down On
A Pure and Innocent Girl
Immediate End
Soaking the Floor with a Pool
Of Distinct Red Gloss
The Weekend Begins Today
— JoeyRoberts2028, May 15, 2026
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Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
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Critiques
GothAngelPoetry
1 month 1 week ago
This is interesting…
This is interesting. Different but I like it.Well written good job
Geezer
1 month 1 week ago
Beware...
of chomping on "pure innocence",
there is a Killer that you don't want to tangle with here.
He is the defender of those who are raped, and victims guilty
of nothing more than innocence.
I'm not sure that you have done a good thing, but you have piqued his interest. He has been bored lately. Sooo, I'd change my diet to those that have the sweetest meat; rapists, child-molesters and murderers of the weak and helpless.
So yeah, we noticed you. ~ Geezer.
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