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Esker

May 30, 2012 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

t o r r e n t i a l i t y

ruse it clever baby

fuse it with your cleaver

the hard candy receiver

drenched in your fear and sweet sweat

wet slather and yes

I would rather

Pump it Pump it
Nitro scene
the fabric crawls
its taut obscene

the broken glass
like glitter death
expound the drones
and fuck the mess

— Esker, May 30, 2012

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: north ontario, CAN

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Critiques

14 years ago

synchronicity.

This poem struck a strong chord with some stuff happening in my life at the moment.

Brother, we do share a deep connection across geography and culture.

Thanks for this, I feel less alone, perhaps that ability is one of the highest aspirations of poetry.