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Feb 20, 2018
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This poem is part of the workshop:
Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form
SunKu 8 Workshop
Grandkids
my heart string
home for Christmas
no water
a week in
at the hotel
Grandkids
hung out
with grandma
— Barbara Writes, Feb 20, 2018
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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Critiques
IRiz
8 years 3 months ago
What a sweet memory
I especially love the first stanza.
What a great metaphor!
Barbara Writes
8 years 3 months ago
Thanks
Glad you enjoy it
Sparrow
8 years 3 months ago
Barbara
A great write and I love this new way,
it makes you think.
Take care of you,
Me as always, Ian. x
Barbara Writes
8 years 3 months ago
Thanks Ian
I appreciate you visiting my work. Glad you like it. I like writing this way. I’m gonna master it for sure