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Feb 26, 2018
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This poem is part of the workshop:
Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form
Sunku 16 Workshop “Summer's Ensemble”
Summer
Is popping
with nature buzz
animals
insects
ensemble chirps
arrived
summertime
Gaia’s Kingdom
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
raj
8 years 1 month ago
Barbara
I will look out for the edits you make for which there is room..your Sunku inspired this
Beyond
the Spring
I hear a buzz
Beetles
chirping
summer songs
Others
join party
from their nests
......
Barbara Writes
8 years 1 month ago
Beautiful raj
I’m weird like that. It’s still spring and everything is drowsy about waking up but I hear them as if they are awake alive and buzzing all around.
raj
8 years 1 month ago
Stanza 3 could be
Stanza 3 could be
Soon
our tails swing
in boogie dance
....
Barbara Writes
8 years 1 month ago
Nice raj
I’m visualizing the ending as a Kingdom like the lion king movie but with the whole planet involved as a Kingdom
raj
8 years 1 month ago
Yep
That's what was the intended purpose in sync withe the "Ensemble" in your title
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Barbara Writes
8 years 1 month ago
Yeah
Glad it worked
weirdelf
8 years 1 month ago
excellent
https://vocaroo.com/i/s10M1MgDzhAB
Barbara Writes
8 years 1 month ago
Thanks
I appreciate your visit as always