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Sparrow
Sparrow
Feb 27, 2018 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
This poem is part of the workshop:

Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

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Sunku

Seek out
A new way
Sunku today.

Feelings
Stretch the mind.
Love a new find.

Explore
Reach out now
For more like minds

— Sparrow, Feb 27, 2018

About This Poem

Last Few Words: This beat the transfer list.. It was a comment, but now a statement which has become a Sunku..

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Direction: How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UK, GBR

Favorite Poets: Wordsworth, and most I have read., This month My pic is a modern painting of a Sparrow that I have decoupaged, The artist was not mentioned but many thanks to the one that made the original..

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Critiques

Geezer

Geezer

8 years 3 months ago

Perfect form...

I liked the praise for the new form and see that you have mastered it. Nice work. ~ Gee.
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Sparrow

Sparrow

8 years 3 months ago

Gee

Thanks very much for your welcome comment, I think we need to have a rest and bring out Killer, Nevermore, and Digit for another meeting!!
Take care young one and thanks again,
Yours Ian..