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raj
Feb 17, 2016 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Sound of a Poem

Sound of a poem
is that tiny drop of thought
creating ripples

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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Comments

Geezer

Geezer

10 years 2 months ago

Not sure...

if it is Haiku, but sure did like it! Short, sweet and succinct! ~ Gee

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raj

10 years 2 months ago

Hi Gee

Appreciate your time, read and comment. Good to know you liked it. You are right, it's not a Haiku but follows the 5-7-5 syllable sequence...

Seren

Seren

10 years 2 months ago

OH !!! My big smile.

Applause Raj .. Brava ...

One of your absolute best my friend I am so glad i found it

Love and biggest hugs Jayne xxx

Rula

Rula

10 years 2 months ago

love this dear raj

"Sound of poem" I thought this so poetic. It also personalizes poetry when you give it a thought.
I wished the third line would read more as separated from the two other lines. Try "ripples created " and see if you like it more.
I have already enjoyed :)

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raj

10 years 2 months ago

Thanks Rula for the read,

Thanks Rula for the read, your encouraging comment and suggestion...I will think about it...

Regards,

lovedly

lovedly

10 years 1 month ago

I came back to ask

a drop is just a drop
how is it small
or tiny?
I wonder
can you inject some wisdom in me
how soever
dropish tiny

Is a drop in the ocean
bigger than dew
how I wish I also knew
raj ur sublime_ocean

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raj

10 years 1 month ago

Hi Lovedly

Here I have used "tiny drop" in the context of a thought...not sure if you find it right..

Regards,

Esker

Esker

10 years ago

Perc!

great poem in so few chosen words

thank U!

(I watch the coffee fill my cup..poetry for this poet!)

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raj

10 years ago

Hi Judyanne

Thanks for your time and read. Good to know you liked it.

Regards,

S

scribbler

10 years ago

Hi

These Japanese forms are great ways to capture snippets in a few lines aren't they? Good job......stan

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raj

10 years ago

Thanks Stan

Yes, I feel challenged to express a thought in short verses. Good to read your appreciative comment.

Regards,