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Jul 22, 2025
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Sorrowful Moments
Depression
No illness more tragic
Than seeing my loved ones suffer so
Unable to bandage or quickly remove pain
A suffering deep within their hearts
Seeking God's help for them
Misery
— Clentin, Jul 22, 2025
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Candlewitch
12 months ago
Depression...
is often thought of as a malady of the mind. But I know it also involves the heart and spirit. I have had depression since I was a young teen. I am living with it successfully, with the help of medication and a loving husband. I like how you show compassion for those in your family who have this debilitating illness. Good work!
love, Cat
Clentin Martin
12 months ago
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