SODS FOR GOD

Your view of humanity's flawed
if you claim trump is fated by God
the lame-brain you praise
only plays to who pays
it's a craze, check your brain, you're a sod!

About This Poem

Last Few Words: ...I seem to be on a limerick bender..hoping to get back to nicer stuff once the planet settles down again... cheers!

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Lake Simcoe Canada

Favorite Poets: Poe, Frost, E.B. Browning, Theodor Seuss Geisel,

Comments

Candlewitch

5 months 2 weeks ago

Hello Thomas,

Do you mean that the planet is going to settle down again? I surely do hope so! I like this limerick very much. Your title is good and gets one's attention. Your language usage is inspired. The theme appeals to me because I am gratified knowing another poet is down on Trump, too. You must know that misery loves company.

I live in a neighborhood with "Trump" postings in their front yards. I am sick of seeing them. Both beginning and ending are reasonable. Nice work!

Always, Cat

Unca Fez

5 months 1 week ago

Always Did Like a Dirty Limerick

Candlewitch pretty much covers my feelings on the topic, too. I've never understood how people can see that he is doing things that hurt them, yet still support him. It's baffling. In any case, I really like it. Well done.

Steve

John Leslie O'Kelley

5 months 1 week ago

Sods for God

No kidding, right! I know a few people with this view and let me just say that they don't have much of my respect. I can't see things turning around quickly, if they do we all are in luck! I thought that this was a good little write! Please comment on mine if you'd like. Leslie.