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Smiles
I have traveled the earth
for miles and miles,
and found things little worth
warm friendly smiles.
Over strange foreign lands
by great lakes and deep seas,
always are welcoming hands
with kind smiles to please.
It's the language of the universe
be you brown black or white,
and translates in rhyming verse
in bright day and dark night.
For a smile is sweetly made
of understanding so kind,
seeking congenial trade
and can be seen by the blind.
It's an offering of friendship
and most pleasing to own,
for both strangers and kinship
and to grow must be sown.
In the heart it begins
and can vanquish a fear,
with wide happy grins
stretching from ear to ear.
And if all the vast world
were offered to me,
not all its glittering gold
is more precious to see.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: I posted this yesterday 10/31/16 but it's not showing that I did ?? So here it is again!
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Keith Logan
8 years 12 months ago
Could not agree more
I have also found it a worthy subject to write on and what a solid conclusion. I'm very much a critic with the object of trying to help writers improve. I don't think you need any tips from me.
themoonman
8 years 12 months ago
Hello,
I like the poem, great content, one many
have written about. There were a few spots
where the rhythm fell, a read aloud should
find them easily.
Because of the content, I felt "less" would be
more, which is true almost anytime when writing.
I couldn't find where you had posted the poem
before, something must have happened that time.
Great meeting you, always good to see another
poet from the good ol south,
Richard
alidzain
8 years 12 months ago
Hi there!
Love the way you rgyme and the imagery as well as the message. Thanks for sharing!
Alid