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Feb 27, 2013
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Sky/ Ground
The moon flat and mouldering
Is both
Hidden and unveiled
Its sulfurous gleem
A gem upon twilights ringfinger
Casts its ceaseless grasp
On the shining beach
above the cowering tide
Time languors
At the foot of cobwebs
Between the glowing grass
— club special, Feb 27, 2013
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Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
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Esker
13 years 3 months ago
been out west....
idaho and then east to Kentucky
america is one big assed country
beautiful.............
I was almost an american
my dad was an american
saw much
died young
I like this poem very much
words shunted in like a mixed freight
listening to House of the rising sun
by the Animals
reading these words...
fitting to the music
Thank You!
Frenchf
13 years 2 months ago
What were you describing
Which .book at bedtime will this be in, a short but good read
Seren
13 years 2 months ago
Hi
Hi
not much to be said except I really love this one my favourite lines
The moon flat and mouldering
Is both
Hidden and unveiled
Its sulfurous gleem
A gem upon twilights ringfinger
sigh a lovely read I thoroughly enjoyed
love JC x