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Jan 22, 2016
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Sitzmarks
Senyru
Kids played in the snow
Massive snow ball fight erupted
They all made sitzmarks.
— Barbara Writes, Jan 22, 2016
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Esker
10 years 4 months ago
Great!
was just outside having a smoke
beautiful out..just the right temperature
thinking of snowball fights as a kid
or the old hockey net patched together!
thank U
sitzmarks!
Barbara Writes
10 years 4 months ago
Thanks for reading.
With this monster storm snow blizzard coming it seem a fitting poem
Rula
10 years 4 months ago
A cute
little poem Barbara..
Barbara Writes
10 years 4 months ago
Thanks
Glad you like it