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Oct 13, 2025
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Sitting Near the Lantana Bush
Bees and butterflies mingle
on the Lantana bush.
I can't tell if they are busy,
or capering on the job.
The Lantana is bright,
orange, yellow -
a fiesta. I imagine
spirited dancing,
singing just
beneath its blooms,
perhaps celebrating
the crowning of the
Queen Bee.
It is late summer.
We are all together -
the bees, the butterflies
and I, happy in this
moment as a single
male hummingbird
swaggers along,
bedazzled by the
glory of the day.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: One of the last memories of the summer. Ah, fare-thee-well, Summer.
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rula
6 months 1 week ago
Dearest Lavender 🪻
This is absolutely a beautiful capture of the season.
Your poetry never fails to amuse my senses. This one fills y heart with mirth up to the brim.
So many thanks for sharing 🙏🏻
Lavender
6 months 1 week ago
Hello, Rula!
I'm glad if this brought you joy! I always appreciate it when you read and comment!
Lx