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May 26, 2025
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simple haiku 🤣
springtime did arrive
frogs are jumping and humping
pigeons are nasty
— mark, May 26, 2025
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About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Direction: How does this theme appeal to you?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Rough draft
Critiques
Candlewitch
1 year 1 month ago
All true...
but, LOL, Mark! Steven told me about the squirrels in heat, falling out of the trees on campus. He said it was very entertaining! Ah Spring...
good work! kitty Cat xxx
Apostolos "Pau…
1 year 1 month ago
lol
good poetry 👌
Clentin Martin
1 year ago
Nice haiku, liked it bery…
Nice haiku, liked it very much!
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