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The Silence Filled With The Right Words
Rewriting Memory
The mutual understanding between kindred spirits
It’s like a language spoken at a higher plane
Even in silence there’s respect and admiration
When in retrospect we know we all felt the same
Amidst reverence and passionate veneration
There’s also a devotion that consumes the soul
As if temptation tries to stain the elation
By changing direction and assuming the role
Here, at the crossroads of compulsion and control
The heart and mind fight for what’s between right and wrong
While keeping restraint there is a consternation
Like a test of character for those who are headstrong
I sit in stillness trying to achieve a balance
Contemplating times of commotion and dismay
Reflecting on the silence filled with the right words
Ready to take on anything that comes my way
About This Poem
Last Few Words: NaPoWriMo2026 Day 25
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Direction: Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Critiques
Lavender
1 week 2 days ago
The Silence Filled With the Right Words
Hello, Wally,
"I sit in stillness trying to achieve a balance..."
Heart and mind - such a conflict sometimes. I find if I sit still long enough, the heart leads the mind in the right direction.
"Silence Filled With the Right Words." Beautiful.
Thank you,
L