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Serendipity
SERENDIPITY
It is there, as I know for certain it is
And helped by this magnifying lens
I do now see it clearly on the globe
An island, where nothing should be
As it is thought to be wide open sea
It looks just like an ear missing a lobe
Does it really exist – well, it depends
Perhaps a suitable question for a quiz
Now I’m searching for this magic isle
Maybe it was the same with Serendip
A place that nobody had been before
Somewhere to hide and not be found
For one’s life, by secrecy to be bound
Yet a very lonely existence, to be sure
There might even be some sunken ship
And survivors living there all the while
It seems to be in the Bermuda Triangle
About which there’s many stories told
Disappearances that few do understand
But whether it is a fantasy or even true
I guess visiting would not appeal to you
So I can make an alternative travel plan
Perhaps a destination to safely grow old
Relocation viewed from a different angle
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
Geezer
6 months ago
I'm thinking...
there is a deserted sea-cavern that fills only once every hundred years, where a pirate ship was stranded and couldn't leave. Their whole existence: two generations have lived there, and no one will ever know if you communicate by carrier-pigeon. Sounds like a wonderful place or something to write home about. Anyhow, I tried to get my head around asking or being asked for forgiveness in some quarter. Yeah, I think I've done that a bit in these last years. Good wrestle with one's conscience, ~ Geez.
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Sen99
6 months ago
A Happy Accident
Who knows whether its on the globe at all, maybe a tropical isle in Avalon, either real or imagined, this is an enjoyable read, both on the origin of ideas about and evocative of a mystery story, a place for future travel.
Well scribed, a nice share