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Apr 16, 2014
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Senyru No more hugs for you
it is not funny
when I do not get my way-
no more hugs for you
— Barbara Writes, Apr 16, 2014
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About This Poem
Last Few Words: My 2 year old granddaughter inspired this senryu
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Critiques
scribbler
12 years 1 month ago
Hi Carolina girl
All the women here in Carolina must be the same lol........stan
Barbara Writes
12 years 1 month ago
Hi Stan
We do like our way. Lol My 2 yr old granddaughter pouts and folds her arm when she hears the word no.
alidzain
12 years 1 month ago
hahaha
short, simple and direct. like it very much.
Alid