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Room to Let

​I look fine.

I go to work.

I go to bars.

I write poems now.

 

​But there's a dirty little room

inside of me

where you used to sleep.

 

​Once it smelled like jasmine

and the sheets were clean.

 

​Now it reeks of cigarettes

and cheap perfume.

 

​The locks rusted off.

Women come and go,

but none of them stay

or tidy up.

 

​I don't blame them.

It's hard to clean a room

that's always dark.

 

​Most of the lights have burned out,

except for one.

 

​But it's starting to flicker.

— Whiskey and Ink (davidgambro31), Jul 01, 2026

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Not actively editing

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