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May 29, 2011
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Resurrection
Inert in stasis,
Comatose, catatonic.
Barely breathing.
Resurrection, adrenaline pumping,
Surging assaulting my senses.
jolting, into overdrive.
Hunger, a craving
Consuming my soul,
Devouring my self control.
Bodies moist gleaming
in post coital congress,
uncoil our union.
Reanimated, sun light returning,
slave to urges once dormant,
Devastating eruption of feeling.
— lou, May 29, 2011
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Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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Eduardo Cruz
15 years ago
Wow
Reanimated, sun light returning,
slave to urges once dormant,
Devastating eruption of feeling.
what an incredible stanza.
It explodes on to the page.
great work lou
I love it just the way it's written.
perfectly carrying the emotions right to the bang!
Eddie
lou
15 years ago
Eddie
Thank you very much.
Lou