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Nov 18, 2025
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Reiki
from warm energy
like sun light melting white snow
weeping hearts may heal
— Lavender, Nov 18, 2025
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About This Poem
Last Few Words: Reiki - a Japanese form of energy healing, a complimentary form of wellness therapy performed with a practitioner / Reiki master.
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Critiques
Geezer
6 months 2 weeks ago
No doubt...
about the effects of this; I really got an image of a gentle winter sun, an ephemeral touch by the separation of (day and light) rather than connecting the two words and the addition of (white) to snow; both give a different feeling if worded in the other way.
Geez.
Lavender
6 months 2 weeks ago
Hello, Geezer,
I like what you saw in this! Thank you for reading!
L