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Oct 24, 2022
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Realizations in the Darkness
My tears became so numerous
They sat like stars in the northern sky
Suspended in the moonless black oblivion of depression
It was there I sat, wearing my cloak of despair
Pondering all things great and small
Under their dim but twinkling light
When realizations became manifest and
The fires of self love were rekindled
— Rosewood Apothecary, Oct 24, 2022
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Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Draft
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Celso G. Tertins
3 years 9 months ago
Although our circumstances
Although our circumstances may be different, i feel this poem slides like a puzzle piece in some moments of my life. same shape although of a different pattern.
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