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Rain

Rain brings about frowns
But should be viewed with delight
Watching how life sounds

— Clentin, Apr 16, 2023

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Geezer

Geezer

3 years 1 month ago

The rain...

brings me an image of fine drops sheeting down, to spread over the earth. The rushing sound of joy as it meets the hungry ground to bring life to our senses. A great Haiku! ~ Geezer.
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