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Jun 09, 2018
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Punctuated Life [Sunku]
Commas
semicolons
keep me going
I hate
to live in
parenthesis
my keys
in life are
shift and press 1
— raj, Jun 09, 2018
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About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Rough draft
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raj
8 years 1 month ago
Thanks Hommies
It's so good to know that you took time to read this poem. Positive comments coming from the accomplished poets like you are like tonic and mean a lot.
regards...
raj
8 years 1 month ago
In the relative context you
In the relative context you are definitely way more accomplished than an amateur like me ...
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raj
8 years 1 month ago
thanks MarkL for the visit
thanks MarkL for the visit and your humorous response...
have i tickled your muse to Sunku? :)
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