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Oct 10, 2017
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Political Pawns:
No morality
Dealing with duplicity
Loss of Sovereignty
— OriginalRhyku, Oct 10, 2017
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Last Few Words: Client states prostrate to alien dictates
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Critiques
weirdelf
8 years 4 months ago
more truth
if you can make the form work, would be-
No morality
Not dealing with duplicity
Will cause Loss of Sovereignty
OriginalRhyku
8 years 4 months ago
Jess
I like your version - it is clearer - although the Rhyku requirement of 5-7-5 syllables will not be met.