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Apr 02, 2026
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A place we all belong!
A heavy meditation,
a reason to move on!
The source of
higher guidance,
will move us all along.
The path of least resistance,
as a river rising,
with current fast and strong!
We hope for change,
within us to create
a joyous song.
You’ll find a hidden message,
within the mantra’s strain,
Something wondrous
leads us,
to the place we all belong!
About This Poem
Last Few Words: There is no way of knowing our journey's timely end. We wait for life's song to end, but within that understanding, the river swells and bends. It contributes to our growing facing challenges, which never end. Give the up preconceived notions, that your life will have an end! You'll find yourself at a portal of light that leads to much, much more.
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Jane A. Rug
3 weeks ago
can't be me a thrill...
but the idea of traversing along an unknown boulevard of broken dreams part of the outcome taking chances to muster courage to get up and follow one's calling, no matter bush whacking with a cheney saw a helpful implement to clear a path.
Lavender
2 weeks 6 days ago
A Place We All Belong
Hello, John,
Good to see your poetry.
"... something wonderous leads us." My views on what exactly this is has changed through my life, but my faith in whatever it is has grown stronger. The Universe is powerful and wise...
Thank you!
L
|Eliza
2 weeks 6 days ago
A lovely sentiment
With all the craziness and division in the world, this poem provides some much needed hope and light. You must be very spirtual. Thank you for sharing, I enjoyed this poem.
William Lynn
2 weeks 4 days ago
Hello
I hope you are doing as well as possible and hope you are hearing joyous songs of hope.
I know you are struggling, but glad you are able to write these words for all of us to consider.
All my best wishes, Will