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Pigeon Pied People

Pigeon Pied People

Pigeon loft people
never near the edge.
Afraid they’ll drop to ground,
living a very ordinary life of drab.
Quietly, careful with their sound.

What is this life to lead,
that they can’t lift a head to cheer.
Closeted in a never land of temerity,
with talk only forthcoming,
when swallowed on
supermarket beer.

All that’s owned is debt’s to banks,
run by barons with sticky fingers.
Their castles have creaky balconies,
where only life so cheap
or death lingers.

No acres to farm for food even less
to run and skip.
Some try to leave or conquer,
measured on the baron’s screen
as a blip.

So sit these people, strange indeed,
no time for chasing social greed.
What of the future,
there’s no great worry.
Sure to come down when it’s the time to bury
See, look the young run round mother’s hem.

They’ll not stray from their loft on high,
it’s here they’re perched
and sure to die.
All they need is within reach,
no need here for freedom of speech.
If used properly, they’re a political gem…

— Roscoe Lane, Mar 05, 2011

About This Poem

Last Few Words: I see tower blocks and i wonder...

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Scotland, Ayrshire land of Burns.., GBR

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Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

15 years 3 months ago

Thank you,

Thank you Ian, unfortunately the world id full of these people, who don't understand that they are the real power. If they just had the courage to stand up and demand it. What a different world this could be. Regards Roscoe...

Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

15 years 3 months ago

I just wish,

I just wish people understood without working people the system fails. So we should demand a better standard of life for everyone or we should not work. Love Roscoe..

Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

15 years 3 months ago

To true Rosi,

To true Rosi, if people just sat down for a week, all being responsible for essential services. And said we will do this when and if we need to, if things don't change we would win. And we could have a fairer world. Love Roscoe..