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Alex Tanner
Alex Tanner
Oct 03, 2023 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
This poem is part of the contest:

Neopoet Image prompt Contest September/October

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OUT WITH THE FAIRIES

I should be out now
In the warmth of the sun.
Playing with Fairies,
We would have such fun.

What's that I hear?
Two and two make four!
I really don't care
School can be such a bore.

Oh! this classroom seat
So hard on my bum.
(Can I say that?)
Please don't tell my mum.

Still the Fairies will wait
Till the day ends
With the ringing of the bell
Then it's off with my friends.

— Alex Tanner, Oct 03, 2023

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Isle of Wight United Kingdom

Favorite Poets: Poe, Swinburn, Bob Dylan, Spike Milligan, Alfred Noyes, Kipling., Many Others.

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Alex Tanner

Alex Tanner

2 years 8 months ago

Thanks Ruby.

Saw the picture, thought of one of my granddaughters and knocked it off. Alex

Alex Tanner

Alex Tanner

2 years 8 months ago

Thanks L

Saw the picture, thought of one of my granddaughters and knocked it off. Alex