Neopoet Weekly Image Contest 10/19/25 to 10/25/25

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Once Upon A Time

I remembered tales of joy and sorrow

As I see the the falling leaves

From my bench of life, dreaming

The stories quiet-spoken,

Of kings and queens,

Of wizards and warriors,

Of lovers and dreamers,

A way to escape,

If only for a while,

Last Few Words: Just Thoughts on a bright Fall day

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

Region, Country: USA Pennsylvania, USA

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5 months 3 weeks ago

I much enjoyed this poem of fancy! Very well done. I have one suggestion:

exchange the word dreamers for dreams.

sorry i am late in finding this piece,

very fondly, Cat

5 months 3 weeks ago

Your are right, made the change.

Thank you!