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Jun 19, 2022
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old lover
<p>you told me it was forever
I would have kissed you forever
was there no truth?
our hearts were connected,
our bodies were bound,
but our love was just a fever dream
you never believed it hurts me as a figment
may you find happiness</p>
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Candlewitch
3 years 4 months ago
hello tommy_boy
it seems like you have a good start. I would love to read more!
*hugs, Cat
p.s.
welcome to Neopoet. no html used here.
Jackweb
3 years 4 months ago
Welcome aboard!
It takes divinity to hold a steady love in relationship. We're all human being. After all women could change like chameleons (Vice versa)! Don't love with your heart. Love with your head.
Looking forward to read more of your piece!