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This poem is part of the contest:

Neopoem Of The Week October 16th to October 22 2022

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O OOOO Maaaaaa GUY...

OMG all know
'tis a mark of exclamation
what!
Now listen to me...

I was dressed as a girl for five years
sent to a convent clothed so little exposed
fairer than fair skin may be a girl with in

till

One day my lovely kid teacher maybe then seventeen
took me to the petrichor field
it just rained a drop or two
she sat open wide couldn't hide
I jumped and then realized the difference

Ran homewards a mile long
she ran but breathless not strong
I told mom tomorrow no convent
she agreed
sweet girl have a glass of water my kid will now not come hereafter She smiled yes ma'am and waved then back to school thereafter
OH MY GUY!
Sweet boy!

— lovedly, Oct 22, 2022

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Life is fun

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Critiques

lovedly

lovedly

3 years 7 months ago

ma guy

waiting to be read still
jack is still running up his HILL
so will come Jill....
O M G???????