nouveau

glitter in the glass
shine like tiger in its grass

you were mirage glare
freedom
a song I had lost

— Esker, Apr 29, 2013

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: north ontario, CAN

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Critiques

Rula

13 years 1 month ago

Hello Steve

Can't get the full image of the first stanza but thought the second one
really deserves the title...Certainly nouveau

loved

13 years 1 month ago

above my balding

mind
once again
though
short and sweet

Geezer

13 years 1 month ago

I think...

I get the image you were trying to project in the first stanza. The elusive quality of both the glitter in the glass and the tiger in the grass? ~ Gee

Esker

13 years 1 month ago

personal sentiment

I have issues concerning alcohol
denial and addiction for this poet
is not seeing what is there
the potential of greatness
for calamity

Or the power of that

i never felt away or free
so I threw what I did not percieve
as freedom aside